Left one 12 with 10% - R one 8 with approx. 50%
You need to practice laying down lines at diagonal 45 degree lines of scrape marks from the side of the SE or part. You need to practice the checkerboard technique.
Will said he had issues until he bought my DVD /USB stick that he bought before the class. He uses a BIAX scraper and not a hand scraper. What I showed him on the first few days of the class that he didn't do right was to sharpen his blade to a 60mmR - 30 or 20 mm wide blade first to get 20 PPI, then a 40R- 3/4 or 20 mm wide blade to get 30 PPI and then a 20 R-5/8 or 15mm wide to get 40 PPI.
He also wasn't using a 1200 grit diamond lapping wheel, I think he used a 600 grit back home and I believe ( I am going to email him, so he reads your thread to tell you as I don't remember exactly) he only used a 60 R and he was getting corner scratches. Also start with a wide or 1 1/4, 25mm blade and as you get more points you use a narrower blade.
One thing that he did that I had a hard time getting him to stop was to dab or drop the blade straight down to scrape each high spot. I showed him how to move in a U in and out sideways which I call dive bombing and Biax calls Technique 40. The dive bomb is done on the diagonal line. Also I showed him how to measure the depth of the scrape mark. After I showed him to do the 8 pounds pressure down on the DR office scale. I believe his depth was .0004" deep. I also showed him to draw the square boxes on the SE to scrape them individually or scrape the first squares highest blue spots in each box before moving to the next box. One of his photo's shows this.
Another thing I showed him was to rub the SE for a count of 10 or approx. 20 times so the high spots change from the same color of the bluing when one only rubs back and forth 1 or 2 times. When you rub a number of time the highest spots get shiny like small mirrors, the next lower high spot shows up as black and lowest is the same color as the bluing.
The key is to scrape diagonal line from the start after you get 10 to 12 PPI after roughing. To improve on yours, you need to scrape the diagonal lines and the next diagonal line doesn't touch the first line and so on down the SE.
Garth one of the other student hand scraped most of the time and he also got a beautiful pattern. He had never scraped before the class and as they say it's easier to teach a new dog new tricks. Will, had some bad habits I had to correct I took several pictures and need to upload a few more here. On the other thread with pictures, 2nd group of pictures you can see Garth hand scraping his angle block the checkerboard technique.
I only use a ground on a surface grinder diamond wheel when I am scraping 30 to 40 PPI. I have 2 brands. One that Spencer Webb that will used and a Lance Beltzley makes
Will said when he goes home he was going to lap his stones on his lapping plates and diamond compound. A normal bench stone is not flat. I buy brand new MS-24 Norton tapered stones and they are not flat. Most are high in the middle .030". Take yur stone and lay it on a granite plate and hinge (pivot) it.
Once you master scraping diagonal lines and then stand at 90 degrees from the fist total 100% coverage, to get the checkerboard look, your scraping will improve.